***Please respond to the following questions during class today.
1. Regarding your Problem/Solution Paper, what did you specifically
address or revise more than anything else to create a complete and final
copy by April 2nd?
2. How did you incorporate ethos, pathos, and logos within your paper? Please explain.
3.
Based upon the entire Problem/Solution paper experience, what specific
writing approach and instruction will you apply to the next writing you
complete? Please explain.
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During my Position Paper, I addressed the fact of corruption and what can be done in order to create a complete and final copy by April 2nd. I incorporated ethos because the fact that much or this corruption is unethical. It was also logical because greed and corruption are bad and it needs to be banished. Next time I write I need to have a clear mind set of what to write, how it will be done and many other things rather than having a loose mind set. By doing that the sources that I site will fall in line with my paper to help me more.
In my problem/solution paper regarding gay rights I specifically addressed or revised the format of the quotes and formally formatting my paper correctly the most. I incorporated ethos, pathos, and logos by taking each opposing side and logically breaking it down and giving the reasons for its invalidation, using the negative emotional sides to the banning of gay marriage, and I ethically backed up my argument with statistics. To my next assignment I will manage my time will and try to focus and gather my thoughts into more compacted arguments.
I was constantly going back and making sure my paper wasn't just a summary or a report. I really tried to input my opinion while at the same time giving hard facts. I incorporated ethos by comparing marijuana to tobacco. I used pathos by explaining to the reader how marijuana helped a little girl suffering from epilepsy, and I used logos by stating the hard facts about marijuana. Next time I write a paper, I will make sure to give the reader straight facts, while giving them my honest opinion at the same time.
One thing I revised more than anything else was the linking verbs that I had to take out. I did not incorporate too much of ethos, logos, or pathos in my writing because I did not think it would help at all. One instruction I will follow next writing is to spread out doing the project so it would be a lot easier the last week. Another thing I would do is try to get more help with my paper so it can be a lot better.
1. Yes, I revised my paper as I went through the process. I added quotes, lead ins, and I made sure it was the paper I wanted to turn in.
2. I put that emotional feeling into the paper. I tried to convince people that my side of the argument was the right side to choose.
3. I will try to plan a little bit better. I might try to use more quotes and more sources. Maybe a more argumentative topic could help.
The thing that I revised the most was how i used my quotes. I used used ethos, pathos, and logos, by showing statistics about my topic. I also tried to connect with the readers emotions. I will use techniques with how I quoted things and found my research.
While writing my Problem Solution Paper I revised my introduction the most to create a final copy. With the help of a highlighting key I added many things that were important for an introduction. While writing my Problem Solution Paper I included an ethos side which is that by getting rid of the Death Penalty you can save money. Pathos was used by saying that the Death Penalty is against the 8th amendment and is cruel and unusual punishment. Logos was used when I said that many states in the US have already gotten rid of the Death Penalty. When writing my paper I used the highlighting links to help me.
I wrote about the community. I addressed a solution that people should see, love, and act with compassion toward each other at all times. I used emotion to relate with people, logic to describe why it is better to have a loving community rather than one who discriminates against. I used ethos because through service projects people can make the world a better place.
I took a more direct aproc. When i was reviesing my paper it should how much i have progressed wioth myu writing and over time i fell it should keep getting better. I also noticed how much i used the word is and it was much of a challange to correct all of them.
As I finished up my position paper on pollution I worked on focusing in on solution amid each of my paragraphs and using quotes to support my facts. In the paper I used pathos with a little bit of a guilt trip. I stated how helping the environment could be ask simple as recycling so why wouldn't you do it? And a bit of that guilt trip also applies to ethos because the moral thing to do is help stop pollution. I used logos in the introduction by stating the fact that pollution affects over 100 million people and is just as deadly as malaria and/or HIV. The next time I complete an essay I will definitely apply the color coding technique to my intro and body paragraphs. I found that that strategy really helped me.
While revising my problem solution paper about the Korean conflict, I shortened the paper and tried to remove the transition words. I also tried to make sure I wasn't summarizing facts, and tried to add more of my own words. I incorporated ethos, pathos, and logos by incorporating the harsh realities in North Korea, and using quotes and statistics to support my argument. From writing the problem solution paper I learned to use quotes and get background on the topic before beginning to write, and I will use those skills on my next assignment.
I revised my introduction more than anything else. For ethos I talked about how everybody needs to help to stop school violence. For logos I tried to use many statistics. And for pathos I talked about how many people are effected by school violence.
Regarding my Problem/solution paper i specifically revised my introduction the most because i felt it was most important. I incorporated ethos pathos and logos all in my paper because i used them when arguing my point and showing how to deny their argument on the opposing side. I will use the approach of focusing on revising my paper more next time.
1. Regarding your Problem/Solution Paper, what did you specifically address or revise more than anything else to create a complete and final copy by April 2nd?
I made my quotes for my paper stronger, and I added more to support my topic better.
2. How did you incorporate ethos, pathos, and logos within your paper? Please explain.
I didn’t use ethos, pathos or logos all that much, but for the stuff I did use it with, I used pathos to try and get people to see that what I’m arguing is a reasonable topic, and I used ethos to get people that my topic was a smart, reasonable topic to argue.
3. Based upon the entire Problem/Solution paper experience, what specific writing approach and instruction will you apply to the next writing you complete? Please explain.
I will try and review my writing more. On my paper, I didn’t really read through it enough, and at the end, that caused a small problem.
In my problem/solution paper I spent the most time editing/changing the facts and quotes trying to find the right ones that would belong where. I incorporated ethos by saying that technology is a big problem and is only getting worse. Spend more time on multiple things instead of a lot of time on one thing and little on others.
During my paper I addressed the problem of college drinking and what can be done to change that problem. Next time I write I will find more research and have a more strict mindset on my paper and that will help my quotes and the way my paper reads and that facts it has to help the meaning I want out of it.
1.The one item i have to go over a lot was simple grammar and punctuation.
2. I used some pathos and that was to show that the people in my topic were doing wrong and that they were not be responsible.
3. I would have to spend more time on the little items like better word choose, not having useles words, and simple sentences.
I edited the first paragraph of my sentence the most because I had to condense a lot of points into one idea strategically. I used ethos, pathos, and logos because I brought up good points that made sense and make the reader think. I tapped into their emotion by putting my ideas out there that make them feel me and I also showed a lot of samples that are easy to understand and agree with. Next writing I do I'll probably try to use more of a variety of words and sentence structures to come across more intelligent and make the reader think I'm really smart and they'll probably agree with me more.
In my problem/solution paper I addressed the debate about genetically modified organisms. I was able to incorporate ethos, pathos and logos by stating what the people thought about GM foods, my opinion and the facts about the crops. During the writing of my paper I really tried to focus on what I believed because I was very supportive about my topic. I enjoy food and I always want to know what I'm putting into my body and how healthy the food is. In my paper I supported GM foods because I believe they have no negative affects on humans and can really do great things. Next time I work on a paper I'll make sure I have it backed up on a different device and I'll write it with Google docs. This problem/solution paper was a good experience and helped me with writing in the future.
In my position paper, I revised and made better the linking verbs and facts that support my ideas. I put in pathos by giving facts of innocent people dying which makes people sad. I put in ethos by showing the Taliban's motives and their religion. I also put in logos by putting in sorrow and a big problem that everyone will want to fix. I will make sure that I have many quotes and facts that will support my argument. I will also know to start out not using linking verbs so I don't have to go back and fix it.
In my position paper, I revised and edited the transitions and words that I sued. I put in pathos by using facts and actual incidents, I also used ethos by using the facts and incidents that would affect people and what they thought of the incident. I used logos by showing the actual facts and showing people how it can happen to anyone which made people think about if it happened to them. I will make sure that I have more quotes to support my argument.
One thing that I wanted to make sure that I had in my Essay was about the document called Black Fish. It really made a big and reasonable point in my essay. And I revised every paragraph but one thing I focused on was making sure that I compared how the animals felt to how humans would feel if we got treated the same way we treat them.
I incorporated ethos, pathos and logos in to my essay by how I said things and the descriptive words i tried to use.
For the next writing I complete I think I will try to work ahead, and make sure that I have everything done within a good time so not waiting until the last moment.
In my position paper. I stated that gay marriage should be legal and how gay marriage shouldn't be questioned.
I took my paper and put 2 perspectives in it to prove that it shouldn't be questioned
In my next paper I will do the same, such as include facts and cited scores including quotes.
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