Concerning your Change The World Paper, please review your
paper rubric and paper to answer the following revision questions.
Please answer specifically. (You could earn up to 25 points for these
responses).
1. What did you did you do well regarding the process and final writing of your CTW paper?
2. What is an area that you could improve upon regarding your CTW paper?
3. What writing strategy will you try to use next year when you write for any class?
4. When you write next year, what steps will you take to turn in a more complete and polished final writing product?
5. What word of writing advice would you give to your future self for next year?
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1. I think I planned out my paper well. I feel as if I really put a lot of work into my plan, making it a lot easier to write. I found it easier to find my evidence, and give my writing structure, making it an overall better paper.
2. I feel like I could have improved in my evidence. My evidence was solid, but I could have gotten quotes that better-supported what I was trying to argue. My quotes also really had no depth behind them. I could of included more numbers or whatnot. They were really just other people like me stating their opinion.
3. Next year I will defiantly plan out my writing as much as I did for this. Since I had most of my sentences, the thesis and conclusion, as well as the evidence all there, the actual process of writing went really fast. It was a lot easier to write the essay and write it well. It would be very helpful for say a history paper, where you could go in many different directions. A plan helps you pin down to exactly what you're going to say.
4. Next year, I will take steps do work on my paper every day. This year, on some days, I could have worked on it at home but chose not to. I feel like if I worked on it at home, I would have more time to polish my essay. I will also take steps to not write with words we cannot use such as are, am, is, and was because I think I had too many of these in my essay this year.
5. My advice for next year is to be more structured. Set out a block of time very ay to work on your paper. Make sure you have a wheel structured plan to guide your writing.
After Seeing the Rubric
I think I defenitly could of worked harder on my conventions and style. I was makred down a lot in my style for using possesive verbs. I had a lot of conventonal errors which brought down my grade a lot
1. I think I wrote my response pretty thoroughly and covered enough topics while still being concise, with decent supporting evidence and arguments.
2. I could have used less linking verbs, and adhere to the assigned thesis paper structure better; I was all over the place and the things I colour coded weren't even in the colour coding categories.
3. I will keep on top of my tasks instead of letting them pile up, as well as organise my thoughts instead of spilling them all on the paper without thought.
4. I will proofread more, have someone else read over and and give me an idea of where I am lacking.
5. I want to tell myself to pay attention to what I am doing and just get things done in an organised fashion as opposed to pulling everything together haphazardly.
1. I feel like i did a good job of providing evidence for my claim and i feel like the prosses was pretty solid as well.
2.I feel like i could have done a little bit more research so that my evidence could be more solid.
3.I will use the theisis statement technique and the technique evidance technique.
4.As i said will need to do more research and make more complete and solid claims .
5.Turn it in on time and to do it in advance and not procrastinate so that i can get closer of a grade to the full grade.
1. I feel as if I really made the story my own and wrote what I knew.
2. I probably could have made it longer with more time.
3. I will definitely try to create a well written thesis for my papers.
4. Create more detailed plans layout and create a rough draft before my final draft.
5. Keep on top of the work load before it piles up no matter what happens.
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