Sunday, May 19, 2019

(Optional) "CTW" Paper Revisions

Concerning your Change The World Paper, please review your paper rubric and paper to answer the following revision questions. Please answer specifically. (You could earn up to 25 points for these responses).

1. What did you did you do well regarding the process and final writing of your CTW paper?

2. What is an area that you could improve upon regarding your CTW paper?

3. What writing strategy will you try to use next year when you write for any class?

4. When you write next year, what steps will you take to turn in a more complete and polished final writing product?

5. What word of writing advice would you give to your future self for next year?

3 comments:

Unknown said...


In the process of this final I did good on the conventions and grammar and had few errors. I could have done better with my organization and it wasn't well placed. NExt year I will more haivly review htr rubric before turning it in. I would give myself the advise to thoroughly run through everything the paper needs before writing it. -Ayan smail

Anonymous said...

When writing the change the world piece I did really well on Conventions and Style and Could have done a lot better on applying evidence to the passage I should have added more quotes. WHat I will d the next time I write an Essay I will try to get more sources and then cite them in The article I would tell myself to give more info and then prove where they came from.

E Cotton

Unknown said...

In the process of writing my Final CTW paper I Believe I did very well on the organization of the paper, along with the way i was able to flow form topic to topic. An area i could improve on is my documentation in my paper. I didn't included my Bibliography into my final version of the paper. I also should have added more Quotes from websites and books to further support my point. nest year I will defiantly start earlier on my paper and make sure i check the rubric before i turn the paper in. an advice i would give my further self is to make sure that i take my time writing the paper. Also to not rush on the paper when i am writing.

Elisabeth Henninger